Please revise my essay by following the instructor’s instruction. Just some minion changes to the essay. 1250 words minimum, and there should be annotated bibliography.
I’ve just made some comments in the paper, but I think you’ve done a great job researching and supporting your argument. Only very minor adjustments are needed.
One suggestion I have is to clarify nonresident vs. international students (students from other states vs. students from other countries). Most of your paper talks about nonresident students, but one paragraph talks about international student tuition and student fees.
Do they currently pay the same fees? Do you want *both* groups to pay lower tuition? If so, you should state this.